From dd22a3c29924f56a044f1c549ff8db02b0b2788f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: zdover Date: Fri, 6 Nov 2015 10:38:36 +1000 Subject: [PATCH] first tranche of edits --- workshop.rst | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/workshop.rst b/workshop.rst index a17bdb16b..ee7b70246 100644 --- a/workshop.rst +++ b/workshop.rst @@ -25,19 +25,19 @@ Curriculum overview Editing files on VMs -------------------- -Parts of the workshop involves editing files on the virtual +Parts of the workshop involve editing files on virtual machines. The ``vi`` and GNU ``nano`` editors are available on the -VMs. If you are not familiar with ``vi`` or unsure what to use, you +VMs. If you are not familiar with ``vi`` or you are unsure of what to use, you should choose ``nano``. Example commands ---------------- -This guide contains many command examples. Some fo the commands are -to be exected on your host, others on either the ``server`` or the +This guide contains many examples of commands. Some of the commands +should be executed on your host, others on either the ``server`` or the ``client`` guest VM. For clarity, commands are annotated with the -host on which they are meant to be executed:: +host on which they are meant to be executed, as in these examples:: $ echo "Run it on virtualisation host (no annotation)" @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ host on which they are meant to be executed:: Workshop feedback ----------------- -After the workshop please consider leaving feedback at +After you have completed the workshop, consider leaving feedback at https://goo.gl/forms/P11DtfJiNq.